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Patricia J.L. πŸ‘»πŸ§ΆπŸ–ŠοΈ's avatar

That was excellent. Very creepy.

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Hannah's avatar

Thank you!! (:

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Jennifer Handy's avatar

Hannah, grab your confidence by the balls, and write more fiction. What a terrifyingly good read and I love that you used a painting as your inspiration. Bravo!

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Hannah's avatar

Thank you so so much!! I will be doing both of those things in the future! I thought I’d experiment with using a painting as inspiration and it turned into a full short. Thank you so much again!! (:

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

AMAZING story! What a wonderful writing style you have. You should write more fiction. You're very talented. Thank you for sharing your story. It's perfect for Macabre Monday!

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Hannah's avatar

Thank you so so much for your kind words, it really means a lot! I appreciate it, and thank you for reading!

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Jon T's avatar

This is very good. You should write more fiction. πŸ”₯

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Hannah's avatar

Thank you so much!! And I’ve been meaning to, hopefully will have time to work on something new. Thanks again!

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Robin Locke's avatar

I've always been irrationally terrified of looking in mirrors when I encounter them in the dead of night. After reading this story the fear seams justified. Delightfully Spooky.

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Hannah's avatar

Thank you!! It’s also a fear of mine, as you can probably tell from the story!

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Matthew Christian's avatar

Great story! It has a lot of strong, unique voice lines that I really enjoyed reading!

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Hannah's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Brian Martinez's avatar

Nicely done.

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Hannah's avatar

Thank you!!

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